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How many scars did it take? 😍
I feel you should assume the place of "that girl" Ask questions like... "Did you have to abandon me somewhere along the way?"
*that little girl...
I would have thought it should be "this little girl", being she's the one writing?
Then again, I've read it like a thousand times. It seems quite ambiguous.
I mean... You're writing to your future self afterall. If you could tell your future self you wish you told you you're amazing, errr...
Or maybe I'm just confused!