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I love the format of the idea—using rhetorics to prove a point was a great method for this message. Your concept was so cleverly-written, especially for only 15 words.
I highlighted two things that I think could be rephrased. I think that’s all—I know you have to keep this at 15 words and this is so well-expressed as is.
I’m sorry that this review was shorter than my other ones are—I’m going on a vacation soon and I have to get these done beforehand. Anyway, great piece! I loved the message.