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As always, the imagery you weave utterly captivated me. I don't know how you do it!
I feel like you may have made a typo in the last line, given the title of the poem. Or maybe I'm just being daft and it was all intentional :p
I was going through your poems and I think you should really publish your stuff as a book! We're lucky enough to live in a time where you can self-publish stuff, and if you want it just say so and I can provide a lot of good links for you to research from :)