Peer Review by Aarushikrishnan (United States)

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Don't trust my words

By: purplepanache


FREE WRITING

For they are not sweeter than blood
Yet thicker

They are not kinder than love
Yet quicker

With the sun ablaze in my throat
And the moon lodged between my teeth
I can speak of these things

With oceans pouring down my chest
And clouds floating in my legs
I can speak of these things

But don't you 
Trust my world
 


Message to Readers

Please let me know if this poem requires an explanation


Peer Review

As always, the imagery you weave utterly captivated me. I don't know how you do it!


I feel like you may have made a typo in the last line, given the title of the poem. Or maybe I'm just being daft and it was all intentional :p


Reviewer Comments

I was going through your poems and I think you should really publish your stuff as a book! We're lucky enough to live in a time where you can self-publish stuff, and if you want it just say so and I can provide a lot of good links for you to research from :)