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True Love

By: RNE


FREE WRITING

He loved her even before she entered his life
She was the ending of all rife
She is the past, present and future
She is his heart's suture
He loved everything about his girl
To him she is like a glistening pearl
She is his sun, his moon, his everything
Without her, life was nothing
All the endless laughter 
Can only come from his precious daughter
 

To my father for all his unconditional love.
"My father gave me the greatest gift anyone could give another person, he believed in me." -Jim Valvano
 

Peer Review

The entire piece moved me!


Poetry is a story in itself, nothing needs to be added.


Reviewer Comments

I loved this! The emotion was real! Well done!

-Mina