Peer Review by inspiremaks14 (Switzerland)

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by any name

By: Surly Wombat


FREE WRITING

something flying
something free
perfect endings
call to me

dance into the fire
dip into the light
taste the ash in the air
what a brilliant plight

crimson stains
dripping tears
a silver dagger
forged with fears

dragged into the deep
quick to sink
swirling waters
drowned in a blink

tainted fame
death comes in many forms
a rose by any name
has bloody thorns
 


Message to Readers

that was morbid but i'm really proud of it


Peer Review

"A rose by any name / has bloody thorns" that was a really moving line to me for some reason


What do you mean by "perfect endings call to me?"


Reviewer Comments

It was beautiful and dark and beautiful and real and beautiful. :)