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Message to Readers
that was morbid but i'm really proud of it
WHOA. I don’t usually do really dark stuff (writing or reading, except Edgar Allan Poe) but holy cow this piece. It really draws you in and the ending gives you such a shock.
This piece doesn’t need anything else! I think if you add things it would ruin the flow and the general beauty of it.
This was your prize review from my contest forever ago. Apparently I’m really bad at time management, lol. I thought that dance you entered a poem, I would review a poem. :) Amazing job on this piece!