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Woot new poem
Wow...I'm speechless, the entire poem moved me!
Is the person talking a male/female? Is the dead person male/female? I'm only assuming the narrator is female, and the dead person is male.
I really enjoyed reading this. You have such great talent, and WOW! This poem was just so raw, heart-felt, and filled with emotion!
Never stop writing and always write free! :)