Peer Review by The Dreamer (South Africa)

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Fourth Wall Love Story: Continued

By: pencils.and.paper.roses


 Yesterday my writer hurt my heart. She gave me a backstory that I would never have guessed from how I am now. 

And it kills me. How am I living like this? 

Since I live like this, it’s interesting to think about how you must live. You don’t have a writer controlling your every move, your every thought and every word. You are free to do as you please. 

It it must be so wonderful. 
Will you tell me about it sometime?

Message to Readers

This will continue on and on until I reach a point that seems fitting for an ending. I hope you like it! :D

Peer Review

The perspective. The fact that you can really feel the heartache, the annoyance, the longing for freedom in everything the narrator says.

I am quite curious to know what the tragic backstory is and how the narrator themselves always imagined their backstory.

Reviewer Comments

I really enjoyed this piece and am excited to read the rest of the series. Also i am curious why you called it Fourth Wall Love Story.