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Message to Readers
Please tell me what you think! I wrote this in one of those blind moments when suddenly ideas just come to you.
This piece so perfectly describes how you feel when you do something you've been avoiding, and what leads up to doing it. The imagery and language is beautiful and so perfect for this piece.
I don't think there's much to do, except the items I highlighted. :)
Great job overall!! Such a great piece.