Onion

Onion3102

Australia

I drink way too much tea (with three sugars might I add), I like hugs a lot & thesaurus.com happens to be my best friend. It almost seems like the older I get, the more introverted I get.

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the view from my window is all i can ask for

blue

November 20, 2018

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early 5 o'clock and sky some form of pathetic fallacy
streaks of azure blended with cobalt blue
the peaks of the asperitas buffed powder white 
not happy but not entirely sad
a romantic kind of sorrow-
beautiful in a way.

There's always too much gravity to feel the highs.
Maybe I should just make my bed among the lows.

The sky now clears
its arctic blue beauty teasing me,
decamping and moving on to the next.
Maybe I should too.

 
pathetic fallacy: A reflection of human natures specifically on nature (weather in particular)
asperitas: A type of cloud- wavy like a blanket 

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  • jengelman

    i like it but i hate when poets use fancy words out of context to try and prove a point. it just makes it less personal, but like do what u want. the only word that was really out of place was asperitas. the rest is fine


    7 months ago