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This is an interesting piece. Do you like how it came out? I hope it wasn't confusing, lol. I don't quite know what I've got here. Does it even make any sense?
I just love how beautiful it is, it’s hard to write poetry but you do it really well.
Absolutely no more is needed! You nailed it! The ending just makes your heart content and ready for your own life.
My favorite part is I see a fire an imagination a home. Knowing this is a love story that’s just the sweetest thing to be said to a woman. ❤️