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I can't decide on just one; "...doe eyes..." I adore that description—it just sets the whole poem off(in a good way!) and makes everything seem more lifelike.
Sadness. Small hope. Wishing.
Does the character's lover ever come back? Does he/she accept and love her again?
"You and I" is a lovely poem, with beautiful descriptions, feelings, words, and relations. I really loved how you made it all run so smoothly, and how it I could really feel what the narrator was feeling throughout the poem.