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Sorry for the short length of this chapter. Thanks for reading and I hope you like it! :)
I really liked the fact that it was so realistic. It reminded me of when my family goes on roadtrips. Also the sibling relationship was really well written. It's easy to see and understand that they are twins.
The proportion of mystery to reality is great and makes me want to keep reading. I think you could perhaps give a better description of the mystery man. Wether its a description of the actual man when she sees him or a description of her sketch is up to you but it definatly needs to be there ( in my opinion)
I can't wait for the next chapter and to see where this story goes. I am excited to see how the mystery will continue to tie into everyday family life. Well done!