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Message to Readers
Warning: This one is depressing.
I really liked this piece because it's just so relatable. I experience this type of thing all the time. I even have a piece on this same topic on my account but you definitely did it better, lol. Your's feels so raw and untapped - like it's so apparent how prominent this is in your life and you're just now beginning to access these emotions.
Who is this directed to? Is this just a general rant at the world or did you have someone specific in mind when you wrote this? In some instances you refer to "the people around me" and in some instances, you use "you" specifically. It seems to juuust about walk the line between addressing one person or addressing many, so I would make that a little more obvious.
I really loved this piece. It feels so real. Never stop writing!