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I really love the personification of the night and how much emotion you entwined in this narrative. It seems like I just read so much in these two stanzas. The contrast between Night and 'they' is really well done as well and showed so much in the story :D Another thing that's really awesome are your verb choices; lots of people don't realize how descriptive verbs are and use adverbs instead, but I believe that good ole, solid verbs are much more precise and create a better illustration for the reader. Excellent job :)
This piece is so complete the way it is. I don't really think anything more could add to its beauty; not even the mention of moon or starlight.
Hey, sorry it took me waayyyy too long to get to this! Your second one will be coming up asap.
Keep writing!! (Especially some more poems like this, please! :)