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The subtle dance this poem performs in the quarters of your mind is indeed the most beautiful thing about it. Thoughts transition from one to another so flawlessly- evidently drawn by a poet of high calibre and skill.
The only suggestion I would like to extend is that you work on the phrasing of the last line. Reading the rest of the work, you cleary are a genius. The last line is, however, only above-average!
This is gorgeous. I am in a daze. Thank you for writing this.