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You did it. This piece showcased a unique perspective!
I think that the piece ends too quickly. I noticed that as the poem progressed it became less abstract. That's fine, but you might want to sequence night's abilities from most to least abstract, and then round it off by gradually becoming more abstract again like so: Abstract-->Less Abstract-->Abstract. That way, the poem would begin and end smoothly AND adopt a moving, chaismic quality.
I LOVE THE TITLE!
Introduces the mood well and invites readers to read like so. Brilliant!