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Message to Readers
Fourth publishment. Hope you enjoy!
I thought the way the author continued their own diminishing alphabet was really creative. I was kind of surprised by it because I expected them to keep in line with normal English standards as they continued their piece, but this method was much more fun and interesting.
Maybe the writer could give more of an introduction. Though I think the title hooks in the reader pretty well, it's always useful to have a good introduction that really ensures the reader will stick with the piece and read it past the first paragraph. The writer could try making it sound like some sort of news article (just a suggestion) and have an introduction saying that people are protesting for a simpler alphabet, or something else that the writer might think of.
I expected this to be a humorous piece just from the title. Other than that, I don't know what I was expecting- but it definitely wasn't this. This was a great piece and obviously had a lot of effort put in! Keep writing!