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Message to Readers
For the special one who broke my heart.
Peer Review
"But I know it's just a fleeting dream". This is a beautiful and profound line!
Despair.
You are really good! (This is a statement, not a question)
Reviewer Comments
Your way of writing and showing the relationship and feeling of the character are very, very real. Great job on this piece!