Peer Review by AminahMcBina (United States)

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Hear Me

By: RNE


FREE WRITING

I do not see like you do, to me everything goes in blurs.
I do not hear like you do, to me it is all too loud.
I do not think like you do, to me thoughts are hazardous.
I do not feel like you do, to me pain is superficial.
But I still walk the world like you do.
So hear me when I say,
'I don't care.'
 


Peer Review

EVERYTHING! I love the honesty and emotion in this piece. It's all so real, relatable, and raw!


Poetry to me is a story in itself. This to me needs no further explanation.


Reviewer Comments

Wow! I'm so happy to have come across this wonderful piece!!!!

Well done and never ever stop writing!!
-Mina