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I like how I never had any idea what would happen next, it was like riding a waterfall of emotion.
I really liked the italicized words at the bottom, it sets your poem apart! If I had to find faults with it, I would say your title doesn't sing to me the way your other ones have, but since this was for a competition I guess it was harder to find a fitting one :)
I have no idea how you manage to fit so much emotion in such few lines of poetry. You amaze me.