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AminahMcBina

United States

Hey, I'm Aminah, but most people call me Mina.
16 yrs. old|SUMMER BREAK|INFJ-T|Female/Girl/She/Her|I think I'm something of a writer|Animal lover||MARVEL FANGIRL FOR LIFE

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The poem fit my mood, and yesterday I finished reading "R.I.P. Eliza Hart" so, yeah :D

I'm Drowning

November 19, 2018

FREE WRITING

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i can't breathe,
i'm underwater,
trying to grab for the surface...

                but i can't breathe.

i'm holding my breath,
trying not to swallow,
the water...

                but it's already in my lungs.

i can't see,
i shut my eyes,
to keep out the chloride...
                   but my eyes are already blurred and red.

i can't breathe.
i'm underwater,
and i can't see.
                    i'm drowning.
Just got done reading "R.I.P. Eliza Hart" by Alyssa Sheinmel

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3 Comments
  • CuriosityKilledTheCat

    DAMN.... I love the formatting. This is great!!


    10 months ago
  • rosemarywisdom

    Wonderful formatting, Mina!


    10 months ago
  • The Bubbling Pen

    I'm a swimmer and this totally encapsulates my biggest fear! I love the way you structured your poem, it feels as if with every extra stanza, the character falls/drowns deeper :)


    10 months ago