Peer Review by The Dreamer (South Africa)()

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The Real Queen

By: Tatihanna101


FREE WRITING

Whilst society wishes to be a rose- exquisitely impeccable and barbed against intruders. 
She stood utterly alone. A sunflower who's joy for life infected all of those around her, who's beauty shone from the inside out and a person who radiantly welcomed all. 
The real Queen.


Peer Review

I liked the messege of the piece. That sometimes we are not what we wish to be but we are still someone amazing and beautiful.


Perhaps you could give a bit more of a description of this 'sunflower'?


Reviewer Comments

It was lovely. It flowed and the simple but strong english made a real impact. Wonderful!