Peer Review by AminahMcBina (United States)

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Five Endings


PROMPT: Five Endings

1. I could taste the rust of blood in my mouth as I turned around and walked away.

2. Alas, all the world watched as she died.

3. She looked at me as her legs were dangling from the precipice and said "don't let go", looking into her golden eyes, I knew I never would.

4. Looking up at the stars she knew her father was looking back. 

5. Goodbyes were not my favorite thing, but watching her go I knew it was not forever.

Peer Review


It's so dark and powerful!

Reviewer Comments

Wonderful! All these pieces would be great stories!