United States of America
Aspiring Author
Dancer
Bookdragon
Icecream Consumer
Daughter of the King
Dessert Craver
Homeschooler
Adventurer
Dreamer
Coffee Drinker
Fangirling over the Ranger Apprentice Series
ISFJ
Enjoy!<3
Written By: Mary Wall
November 16, 2018
PROMPT: Five Endings
4 Comments
Mary Wall
Thanks Paperbird!
paperbird
Wow, I love these, particularly 2, 4, and 5. Really creative.
Mary Wall
Thank you so much! Your comment meant a lot to me!
Luna Lemon
These are all so unique and well done! The first one seems that it could go down so many directions. I like the character's voice in the second ending. You can already tell this character has a humorous take on their situations and in just one sentence you set up a character. That's amazing! The third one is similar to the first one where it could go in soooo many different directions. And the fourth one is really well-written, leaving the reader with nostalgia and reminiscing in taste of s'mores. Love your word choice with, melted, crammed, and the simple, ¨Life couldn't be better". And what a great last ending! It's poetic and I'm sure with whatever story went along with it, it would be absolutely beautiful.
Great job and keep writing:)