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This was very long and very random, I know. But I found it extremely interesting to write about a zenana/harem and I wanted to share a story on this. It was influenced by (drumroll, please) The Belles by Dhonielle Clayton and Traitor to the Throne by Alwyn Hamilton.
I hope you guys enjoy my little take on this and please, please, please, comment and review! I really would like to know how I did on this. Also, I was thinking of releasing a Prequel to explain this odd world that Seo-Ah and the other Flowers live in. Let me know if you want this. Thanks!
The thick backstory behind your story completely enraptured me. I love how you just hinted at facts without revealing it, and the smallest details hid mountains.
If you had a scene with an interaction with the emperor, it could have really given Seo-Ah's escape and motive a three-dimensional quality. Your piece is exemplary as it is, though, so feel free to leave it in this form!
Thank you so much for participating in my contest! Your piece was an absolute delight to read, and so very refreshing, thank you for writing it!