Peer Review by Riverside04 (United States)

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I GUESS THIS IS AN UPDATE!

By: AminahMcBina


FREE WRITING

Okay, so I'm not the one to do updates on WtW (Unless its for a certain novel, hang tight I'll get to that), but I just HAVE TO DO THIS ONE!!!!!

1ST WHAT IN THE HECK?! HOW DO I HAVE 50 FOLLOWERS?!♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
I made an account in September, but never posted anything until October 24, 2018. You know what that means? I haven't even been on here for a month! SO SHOUT OUT TO (ctrl+F to find name):
  1. stripedfly1001
  2. Faith Camp
  3. Special Shout Out to Catherinely Me
  4. Special Shout Out to rosemarywisdom
  5. Unamor_Unavida
  6. Special Shout Out to Your Local Flynn
  7. hibasaurus
  8. lianhabanana!
  9. Super Duper Special Shout Out to Kitty Cheshire
  10. Ivy
  11. Grazella
  12. palindrome
  13. Luna Lemon
  14. Johanna
  15. mouniafarissi
  16. Special Shout Out to R.J.Elsewhere
  17. 2A,2H and 1D
  18. Gabriel Goodwin
  19. AbigailSauble
  20. Corner Writing Club I know this is two people, but whatever + special shout out.
  21. huda_ayaz
  22. Nonny21
  23. Chloe_Cat
  24. Catlover
  25. star_girl
  26. ancientvoices
  27. Quille
  28. LilLove
  29. nezi_nes
  30. shadow+dust
  31. valentina
  32. Special Shout Out to PineappleGirl
  33. Majestically Awkward Manatee
  34. tchnclr_wrds
  35. Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill
  36. _TJNR@cheshire_
  37. nevaredhp
  38. Billie Aitken McGregor
  39. Special Shout Out to Ryder
  40. OhBaloney!
  41. AnonymousWriter
  42. Syl
  43. korra4life
  44. Cololo231
  45. RNE
  46. Avin
  47. i.c.f.l.o.w.e.r.s.
  48. The Bubbling Pen
  49. Camlily
  50. N.
CHECK OUT EACH OTHER'S WORKS!

2ND. "Changing Moon: A Werewolf Story Chapter 5" will be up later, IF AND ONLY IF YOU FOLLOW THESE RULES: Comment what you'd like to see a next part of (The most wanted wins + "Changing Moon" will still be up):
3RD. I WANNA START A CONTEST, BUT I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD. I HAVE A PROMPT, AND EVERYTHING...I JUST NEED YOUR VOTE! COMMENT WHAT YOU THINK ☺

4TH. I NEED TO MAKE A PLAY FOR MY ENGLISH CLASS (THIS IS HONOURS 11TH GRADE WE'RE TALKING ABOUT) SO PLZ GIVE ME SOME IDEAS!!!

5TH. COMMENT THE TITLE AND/OR THE LINK TO A PIECE YOU WANT ME TO REVIEW!

ANOTHER SHOUT OUT TO ALL OF YOU, FOR YOUR ENCOURAGEMENT, I NEVER THOUGHT THAT MY WRITING(S) WOULD BE RECOGNIZED, SO THANKS AGAIN!

Hugs and more hugs,
Mina

ANOTHER SUPER DUPER SPECIAL SHOUT OUT TO KITTY CHESHIRE, CHECK HER OUT! ALSO, IF YOU WANT A Q & A COMMENT QUESTIONS ON MY PIECES, OR MAKE A PIECE FULL OF QUESTIONS, AND I'LL ANSWER THEM.

Message to Readers

Always Write Free,
Mina

To the 5 new followers,
This was written around 9am; I wasn't leaving anyone out. So shout out to you all too!


Peer Review

I am very happy for you


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Reviewer Comments

i want to know how to have good writing stories please read mine and comment back about some advice please