Peer Review by AminahMcBina (United States)

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Broken

By: RNE


FREE WRITING

I'm breaking to pieces
you pushed me down 
and trampled all over my heart
then you come back bringing me roses
I'm broken to pieces 


Peer Review

The entire piece delighted me, because it was so short and powerful, filled with so much emotion!


Poetry to me tells enough of a story, I don't think that the author needs to add any more detail.


Reviewer Comments

This was superb! Well done!

-Mina