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I would love to know how I can improve my writing. Please give me any feedback you have. I am very open-minded and I want to know your exact thoughts so I can become a better writer. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this!
The futuristic references.
By giving her anxiety and doubt.
No not really. It is fine just the way it is.
The description of the setting was good.
You created a really good atmisphere and storyline. Please keep writing!
It was a great story and still has me wondering. Please write a second piece! I need to know the rest of the story!