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That plot twist at the end was..amazing like oh my. I love this story especially since i'm trying to draw a dragon and reading a story about one was really nice.
What happens next??? Does she fall off and die? Get injured? Is the boy some sort of long lost relative who has a grudge against her parents therefore pulling her off the cliff.
Overall it's very descriptive, few grammar errors so look over those and if possible please continue as i love this a lot.<3