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The way you used a rhyme-scheme to better convey the time period! It was fun and well-done.
As I mentioned in a comment at the bottom, we never learn who says the last stanza, so I would love for a clarification on that! Otherwise, I think this poem is pretty complete.
This was a sweet poem that was a lot of fun to read!