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The format of this piece really got to me, in a good way. I love it’s repetition and style and your use of colour. The descriptions that come along with the colours are especially lovely.
I found myself enjoying this so much I felt a little pang of sadness when it ended. The yellow is a lovely way to finish it off and maybe you were only going for primary colours but I would have liked to see what you could have done with green or purple or any other number of shades.
I’m on a touch device so I’m finding it somewhat hard to highlight and directly comment on lines I liked but one I really really loved was “The sunlight paints our skin a kaleidoscope of colour.” I have a tendency to fixate on lines I love and I found myself rereading this one a few times.
I also really enjoy the soft type of love you portray here. It’s a warm and cozy sort, nothing scorching nor cold and I feel moved by it because that’s exactly the type of love I want.
In conclusion, I really enjoyed your piece and the emotions I felt while reading it.