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The opening sentence -- "Every child gets to live in their own world of fantasies" really drew me in. It's a very interesting way of starting a novel.
They actually provide facts about the character's backstory. For example, Sanele was born in Soweto on the 6th of March, 2002, and he is afraid of people and crowded spaces. That really rounds out his character.
Why did his mother want him to switch schools the first time?
Yes, the author tells us the setting right at the beginning, and they do it really well, too. Judging from the details, I assume that this book is set in South Africa. Correct me if I am wrong.
You're doing so well! Try adding more periods instead of commas (don't worry, I do that too!), and check your punctuation. A good way of editing your work is checking for COPS: Capitalization, Organization, Punctuation, Spelling. Awesome work so far!
I like the tense relationship between the protagonist and the mother! Great job with that.