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constructive criticism would gladly be appreciated!
The imagery! When I can see what I read, it draws me into the words even further, and you did a great job!
I'd love to know a back-story behind this! How exactly did they meet? This is like a song describing their relationship, and what they went through along the way.
I love the rhyming, and again, the picture you present is really great! I'm an Oregonian (USA), and rain means a lot to me. You can do so much with it, and I love that you used the analogy (though perhaps literally, too) of 'rain' to write this!