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Please tell me how I could add more detail to my writing.
The fact that you would try to make amends with people from the past, before it's to late.
I'm left with the feeling that you would rather accept the fact that the World is ending as opposed to falling in a state of panic.
I don't find anything wrong with your statement about the end of the world. I also feel like you might be speaking from the heart.