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"Beautifully written and so much wisdom in such a small amount of words, once again blew me away." -AJ IZZY I have to agree, because your piece here is short and sweet, yet have a powerful and wonderful message. I love how everything is. Your word choice is unique and different, not how I hear people talk most of the time, but I still love it.
Do you believe you laugh like a fool? Or are a fool? Also, I was wondering why you called it' 'live'? I think you should call this piece 'laughter' or fool', it seems to suit better. But it's your piece and I'm sure you called it 'live' for a reason.
Great piece! Congrats on the nomination!