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AminahMcBina

United States

Hey, I'm Aminah, but most people call me Mina.
16 yrs. old|11th grade|INFJ-T|Female/Girl/She/Her|I think I'm something of a writer|Animal lover|Virtual school|Marvel

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Always write free,
Mina

@Catherinely Me's "I *COULD* WRITE SONG LYRICS!!!!!!!!"

November 8, 2018

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So this is a bit depressing but it was the only pre-written poem I have available, rn.

If this isn't what you're looking for, just let me know, and I'll send you another :)
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Title: One by One

One by one we all fall down
All these days I feel I’ve drowned
I try and hold my ground;
 
But these feelings they take me,
Make me,
Hold me,
Squeeze me,

Why can't they just release me?

 
So the title and first verse "One by one we all fall down" means tat all these emotions and feelings we have inside of us, shape us and are the cause of our 'falling down.' Like the reasons as why we feel depressed, sad, tired, and sometimes don't want to move forward.

Hope this helps!
-Mina

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  • green.eyes.gurl

    Okay I really love this poem, but it seems a little sad-ish for a JHS chorus. I really do love this poem though!


    5 months ago