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Message to Readers
This is my entry to the #firstraycontest
I really liked how you incorporated religion into this, it gave it a fresh edge, and was wonderful to read. I like the pieces of imagery too, it brought your piece to life!
If you described the healing process in better detail it can really help your writing shine! It's a very nice piece as it is though, don't change it if you don't want to.
Thank you so much for participating in my contest, I really loved your piece and am looking forward to reading more!