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AminahMcBina

United States

Hey, I'm Aminah, but most people call me Mina.
16 yrs. old
11th grade
INFJ-T
Female/Girl/She/Her
writer
Animal lover
Does virtual school, count as homeschool?
Marvel
Marvel
More Marvel
No offense DC fans :)

Message to Readers

Always write free,
Mina

Bite Me

November 8, 2018

FREE WRITING

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Vladimir lay in Godfrey's arm, looking gaunt and pale; life slowly inching it's way out of him. His alabaster skin turning almost translucent. Godfrey watched through blurring eyes, "Vlad, take all you need," he said, his words almost a sob. "Whatever do you mean?" Vladimir replied, knowing all the while what his distraught friend meant.

"I  know you're one of them. You don't have to hide from me anymore," Godfrey explained, his voice trembling. "I would never hurt you," Vladimir replied, he knew he was dying, and his friend; his only friend was desperately trying to save him.

"You could only hurt me, by leaving me. So bite me," Godfrey said, resolution in his voice. Vladimir knew he couldn't convince his friend otherwise, he could hardly keep his own eyes open. His fangs protruded instinctively as his now barely opened eyes zoned in on the pulsating vein in Godfrey's neck.

Godfrey leaned forward, over the body of his dying friend; making sure his neck was well-aligned with Vladimir's mouth. He insisted to keep his friend alive, and he knew his friend wouldn't take too much from him, just enough to keep him living. "Bite me," Godfrey smiled as he heard his friend sigh with relief, as Vladimir's fangs sunk into his neck.
Smh. My horrible attempt at vampire-ing-whatever.

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4 Comments
  • AminahMcBina

    :) Thanks RNE!


    6 days ago
  • RNE

    After all those knock-off vampire junk, your piece made me want to cry(with joy)!


    6 days ago
  • AminahMcBina

    Eh. Thanks though, mama hen :)


    6 days ago
  • Kitty Cheshire

    I thought it was fantastic. Geez! You don't give yourself enough credit!


    6 days ago