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i still am editing a piece i do not love
it is 10:37
This was such a deeply personal piece. You carved a beautiful piece of yourself out for the reader, and I feel like I know you know, your secrets and your thoughts.
This piece is virtually perfect. If I could amend any one thing, though, I would perhaps have a few more (or maybe even all) of the stanzas ending with "that morning I wrote a poem..." I feel like it would really tie it all together wonderfully. It's a beautiful poem your way too, though!
This was gorgeous. Thank you so much for writing it, and thank you again for participating in my contest. I'll be looking out for more of your work.