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I loved the first paragraph! It really drew me in and everything about it was wonderful!
I'd love if I got more information about the character. Any quirks? Habits? Biting nails etc? That would make the character feel like a living person!
I would love the last few paragraphs expanded. Maybe more inner thoughts?!
Yes! The imagery of your story has really allowed me to feel like I'm in the setting of your novel. I want to know about the house, bedroom etc. though. I want to know the small things.
I love the imagery in this novel! I think you're really talented - and amazing at brevity. I'd love to read all your stories!
Please keep writing!