Peer Review by Christy Wisdom (United States)

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Falling For Nothing

By: AminahMcBina

why do i
even try

to fall in love with you?

you are like a shadow...

                                                You will eventually vanish...

and chasing something no longer there, is sheer stupidity.

Peer Review

I think that more so the structure of the poem adds to it, as there is some punctuation, which I do think adds to this poem.

The structure helps, because we see a question drawn out in a sad, hopeless string of thoughts coming from the mind of the person in the poetry.

Reviewer Comments

While this prompt says no punctuation, and you used some, not everybody has to follow the prompt to the letter and it resulted in a pretty good poem!