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Maybe the fact that the person is in France; I always enjoy reading pieces that take place in other countries.
What made him/her go to drink? Is there a problem in their life, or are they doing it for mere fun?
This was an amazing piece. I do really enjoy reading your pieces, very much! I think that you are a very talented writer, and I swear I wish I had you by my side when I'm writing, because you are seriously one of the best writers, I've encountered thus far. I know a lot of users say that they don't like pieces that only compliments their work, but this piece was just phenomenal, so great job!
Always write free,