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I really liked how simple it was- not some complicated scheme of Samuel's to kiss Hope. He had obviously thought about it and possibly planned it out, but i wasn't overly romantic like the movies and his closer to real life.
I'm not really sure I understand where the context of the second sentence came from. For a second I thought Samuel Plett was about to narrate. Maybe make that more clear that Hope is speaking at the beginning, not Samuel?
As i already mentioned, I love the simplicity. Great work!