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The suspense has me eager to know what is really going on.
The character's thoughts tell me more about her pesonality and how panicked she is feeling.
I think that maybe you could do her funeral as a scene. Allison could tell it to her. To give a bit more information on what she was like, how many friends she had and how she died. What do you think?
I think the description was good and I knew where I was. What if you add a bit more description of the rooms? That will reveal herpast life, erhaps?
You wrote a really good suspenseful story. I tore thruogh the peice to get to th end!