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This piece is an amazing piece, without the usually clichéd ending.
The twist at the end where the narrator says, "why daddy?"
"He used to be my inspiration, he used to be my everything..."
This piece has such a dark mood! Suspense and betrayal does this piece well!
I'm wondering why the father stabbed the narrator?
Well done on this piece!