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AbigailSauble

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' "Though the mountains be shaken and the hills be removed, yet My unfailing love for you will not be shaken, nor My covenant of peace be removed," says the LORD.' ~ Isaiah 54:10

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"Most people never meet their heroes;
I grew up with mine." ♥

“And the one good thing about being down here, is that we’ll save on funeral expenses.” ~ Puddleglum (The Silver Chair)

As we express our gratitude, we must never forget that the highest appreciation is not to utter words, but to live by them. ~ John F. Kennedy

How lucky am I to have something that makes saying goodbye so hard. ~ Winnie the Pooh

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What Have I Done

November 4, 2018

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What have I done?
Aubrey took a step back in a daze. Her hand flew up to cover her mouth. Her light green eyes portrayed her complete horror at the picture before her.
It was all too real. Goosebumps raced up her bare arms, and she shook involuntarily. It was too much.
Oh God. Unbelieving tears sprang to her eyes.
Benjamin Farthing, her fiancee, lay before her, crumpled up in a growing pool of his own blood. He was still. Too still.
Aubrey stared down at her right hand, which shook as she held it out before her. It was coated in the same crimson. Benjamin’s blood.
A strangled sob escaped her throat, she wanted to throw up or faint. Anything to escape the horrible scene before her. But not just before her. All around her. Permeating her senses. The room was thick with the metallic smell.
A kitchen knife lay at her feet; its handle sticky with her red fingerprints.
My fingerprints. My knife. My fiancee.
Aubrey gulped. The room swam in circles before her.
What have I done?

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4 Comments
  • AbigailSauble

    Ha. :P Exactly. ;) I know.....kinda........morbid, but..... ;)


    11 months ago
  • Made4Love

    Wow. What just happened? Why?!?
    Very well-written! You revealed enough, yet didn't give away too much. And the emotion - I feel like I'm right there, like I'm Aubrey. Wow! Just had to say that again:)


    11 months ago
  • Victoria Penning

    ;D I like it. ;) XD


    11 months ago
  • Victoria Penning

    .........O_O AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    11 months ago