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dawn of realization

By: fatpanda


but lying here
in the darkness of my mind
and in all of my misery
i laugh

nobody cares.

Message to Readers

okay y'all i'm not depressed, just reflecting on some really bad times

Peer Review

I was surprised when you laughed. I expected crying or nothing.

I want to know how you were inspired for this piece.

Reviewer Comments

Amazing twist in the end.
I look forward to reading more work from you.
Keep writing!!!