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<3 Enjoy! <3
I loved how ambiguous this was. It kept me asking for more, constantly, which takes a very talented writer to do!
I'd maybe like a little bit of backstory. Perhaps you could write a second part to cover it? But like I said, the ambiguity makes this piece wonderful!
This was a lovely read, thank you so much for participating in my contest. You are a very talented writer, please never stop writing!