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This is for my lit class, retelling a poem in a creative way. Maybe it isn't normal to retell a poem with another poem, but it's still creative. Please review away because I want to improve my poetry writing skills.
This piece is beautiful! It's written so well - giving some information but also allowing the readers to fill in some of the gaps themselves. You used amazing language choices! I especially loved the introduction: it reeled me in.
I would love a poem about the girl :) but there's nothing I would improve about this poem.
I wish I could write poetry like you!